After an absence here, I am back -- but with a familiar topic: war. I stepped away from reading war books, but a couple found me recently, and so I read them. I find this happens when the days get short.
Kevin Powers and Brian Castner both served in Iraq, Powers as an enlisted Army machine gunner and Castner as an Air Force (captain) explosive ordnance disposal (EOD) officer -- a bomb tech. Powers -- who has an MFA (and was a Michener Fellow in Poetry) has written a short, dense, harrowing, bloody novel, The Yellow Birds. Castner, who has a degree in electrical engineering, has written a short, dense, harrowing, bloody memoir, The Long Walk: A Story of War the Life that Follows. Together, the books make for a dismal and meaningful pair, two snapshots of warfare gone especially bad.
First, Castner. The
Long Walk is divided by alternating sections of the past and near-present
time. Castner recounts being briefed,
while on duty in Saudi Arabia after 9/11, about how to turn off certain nuclear
bombs that intelligence believed had been acquired by Osama bin Laden. After the demonstration, Castner writes,
"Now I knew what I wanted to be when I grew up." His passion, it turns out, is heroic but unavoidably
destructive. For Castner, the work is
physically damaging and psychically scarring.
A good deal, if not the majority, of the mental damage has physical
roots -- traumatic brain injury (TBI) caused by proximity to scores (hundreds?)
of explosions.
Castner arguably approaches his condition and experience
like an engineer -- with structure and analysis. By contrast, in The Yellow Birds, Powers continuously flexes his
poetic capabilities. His prose is rhythmic,
sensory, adjectival. Rivers and water
and blood thread their way through the book, and the writing often has a
sinuous quality. Yet, ultimately I
(first person, sensitive here to my subjectivity) found these qualities distancing my
mind from the story, from the soldier's experience in Iraq. Powers book has been very highly praises and
was a finalist for the National Book Award.
It is worth reading, and at its heart, it tells a tragic story of the
narrator's guilt and unraveling following the death (not a spoiler) of his
comrade. For me, though, the highly
aestheticized telling of the story weakens its emotional impact.


















